»GC poem aXed plz see...also commentcomment

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  1. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    At first lets get it straight. I have written this poem. It tells my first day in GC. So I present you the poem of the century.

    My first day in GCraft,
    It was coastal,
    I had to make a raft.

    I tried to make it
    But a kid killed me
    With an archer kit

    I was aghast
    And never knew
    The arrows were this fast

    I tried to make a bow and arrows
    To kill the people
    Who were my foes

    Like a noob
    I tried to shoot
    From OP people
    I wanted loot

    But, I was not good at archery
    The arrows missed
    Due to that
    I had to face mockery

    I was sad,
    I complained to the mods
    Cuz I thought they were the lords

    Finally, I attacked
    We were a group
    That was tightly packed

    So I got the chance to kill some
    Then I realized
    I was actually having FUN

    I was SOO busy having fun
    I forgot to
    Escape from that place and RUN

    To the mines I went
    A pick to me someone lent

    I made some enemies
    And and some friends
    And of anni they taught me the trends


    My Day at anni ended
    To save the nexus I fended (enemies)
    At the last we won
    Then I Realized I Was Having

    FUN





    I HAVE NOT YET DECIDED THE TITLE. I WANT YOU PEOPLE TO DECIDE IT. THANK YOU
    YOURS FAITHFULY
    TYSON333
    ANNIHILATION PLAYER

    Please rate if you liked.
    Spent an hour on it.
    Had to look through anni vids.;):)
    Plz @aXed
     
    Last edited: Jan 30, 2016
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  2. -Killas-

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  3. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Thnx. I like to do poetry in free time.:)
     
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    SweetHeart_HD Ancient Poster Member

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  5. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Thank you
     
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  6. VIPTOOTH

    VIPTOOTH Member Member

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    Good work mate :D You got a good vocabulary in your brain :p
     
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  7. Benzy

    Benzy Honorary Poster Member

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    Nyc , i Like it :)
     
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  8. Stimay

    Stimay Member Member

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    Nice! :D
     
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  9. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Thank you guys. I look forward playing anni with ya
     
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  10. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Hell yeah! aXed has NOT seen my poem:(
     
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  11. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Can anyone of ya bring aXed's attention to it?
     
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  12. nedac

    nedac Ancient Poster Member

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    I think axed is busy 24/7 with his illuminati army @lolnoteven
     
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  13. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Ok......i just wanted to you know make GC the best:(
     
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  14. pebro13

    pebro13 Forum Veteran Member

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    Why is this not on YouTube yet? xD
     
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  15. nedac

    nedac Ancient Poster Member

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    This is some vevo stuff right here
     
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  16. tserrano

    tserrano Quick Digit Member

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    treu story
     
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  17. DeathMystic

    DeathMystic Addict Member

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    When I saw the title "Like always I was gonna swear at it" but its actually kinda nice :)
     
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  19. Tyson333

    Tyson333 Member Member

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    Thank you guys i didnt expect this big response;):). I hope i can compose more poems in praise of GC
     
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  20. Neroprojekt

    Neroprojekt Journeyman Member

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    Nice Poem, Well done ;)
     
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