»Comic Seventeen

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  1. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Greeings, glorious guildcraftians. In case you haven’t read the last comic. I suggest you read them to keep with the story, if you’re interested. Anyways, enjoy.

    ???: SCREECH!!!

    A large eagle, whom’s wings spread far enough to measure the width of fifteen men. The eagle was full of haste, it was determined, it was bloodthirsty. Finally the eagle landed on a large, grey, smooth rock. It perched itself on the very tip of the stone. Behind the eagle was two mysterious figures running after the majestic bird, who screeched and squawked. Finally one of the figures managed to catch up to the eagle.

    Viqious: Father? What is your plan?

    The eagle turns from a bird into a man. The man was Diyon, God of Shapeshifting. Capable of changing into any animal as he pleases.

    Diyon: Calm yourself, youngling. The PyroKnight will soon be ours... where’s your sister?
    Viqious: Being foolish... that’s what.

    As soon as the Goddess of Illusions has finished her sentence, Xephanez, The Goddess of Manipulation, charged out of the bushes. Covered in sweat, blood and some scars, she did her best to catch her breath again.

    Viqious: Get up! We have now time for thou’s troubles. We have our own.
    Xephanez: But that’s what I must warn thee about sister.
    Viqious: Pardon?
    Diyon: I repeat after your sister Xephanez. What is it?

    Taking a deep long breath, she calms her mind, she wipes off the sweat. And finally... she speaks...

    Xephanez: It’s PyroKnight...
    Diyon: Again... pardon?
    Xephanez: It’s PyroKnight... I saw him and this time, not with one... but TWO... two children.
    Viqious: This devil spawn must be slain and die in the most vile and slowest death possible.
    Diyon: Is what you speak true? Xephanez... if you’re fiddling with my hopes and tossing them in a river, I shall have your head!
    Xephanez: No father. I speak truely. Follow me if you don’t trust me.

    Xephanez ran back through the forest, with Diyon, whom shaped into a leopard. Sprinting and pouncing among the trees, and Viqious who doubted her elder sibling but still followed anyways. The trickery trio finally made their way onto a cliff side. Diyon shapeshifts into a hawk, for it’s glaring vision. Diyon scopes across the land, soon his eyes met with Kocoski, Luisa and I.

    Diyon: I don’t believe it. Xephanez spoke truthfully. Viqious... thank your sister.
    Viqious: Apologies... for doubting... you.

    It felt like a punch in the gut for Viqious to baffle those words, even thinking about it causes a migraine. Xephanez was more than delighted to hear her younger, stubborn sister say something nice about her for once.

    Diyon: Enough sister time. Now is the time to strike our enemy.

    Confused by their father’s words, the two sisters glared at each other trying to understand. Diyon then shapeshifted into a gigantic beast, with wings larger than an eagle, teeth sharper than dagger, horns that poke a hole through metal. With one deep breath, the scaly beast screams into the open sky! Echoing across the land. Luisa And Kocoski were alarmed by the sound, I wouldn’t allow the sound to distract me. But the sound was very... familiar... like I’ve heard it before.

    Luisa: What was that?
    Kocoski: It hurts my ears. Why is it still echoing?
    PyroKnight: Boy?
    Kocoski: What?
    PyroKnight: I’m certain echoes don’t get... louder.

    It was not an echo but a whole pack of large, scaly winged beast flew above the blue sky. Spanning their large wings until we could not see the clouds and sun. These were no ordinary creatures... they were ‘Wyverns’. Hundreds of them, hungry, angry wyverns. They were desperate for food, they’ll devour anything or anyone that seems edible. One of the wyverns swooped down for us, luckily we got out of the way. Unfortunately we could not avoid the second one. The second wyvern took Kocoski and Luisa, it’s large claws or talons (Whatever you wish to call them) was putting too much pressure on the children. They couldn’t move a muscle, they were trapped like rats. When I was caught off guard, another wyvern, bigger than the first two managed to swoop in and I too fell victim to it’s powerful claws or talons.

    PyroKnight: Unhand me!
    Kocoski: That’s impossible... wyverns... shouldn’t be... anywhere near this area.
    Luisa: Why would they... even come here?

    Breaking out the wyvern’s grip I climb onto it’s stomach, soon on top of it’s back. On it’s neck I saw a hooded man. Riding the wyvern, acting like he controlled the wyverns. The hooded man turned around and faced me. He rose from his sitting spot, grabbed out his spear... and struck me. He and I were fighting on the back of a wyvern, wind blowing in our faces, wyverns screeching, shattering our ears. While fighting, I saw a mark scarred into the man’s arm, it says ‘Ngyuyang’. The fight was intense, stabbing the wyvern tamer with the spikes on the beast’s tail. Eventually... I pinned ngyuyang onto the flying lizard’s neck and cut off the wyvern’s neck.

    Ngyuyang: Jiu jiu wo!

    Within that split second, a smaller wyvern lunged itself to save ngyuyang and the wyvern I was on, is falling. Behind me, I saw Kocoski wriggling his way out, he was struggling. When I had to save him, the symbol on his left arm started to glow a light blueish colour.

    Luisa: Kocoski?
    PyroKnight: Boy?
    Ngyuyang: Nanhai?!

    Grey clouds emerged in the sky, summoning a massive bolt of lightning, incinerating every wyvern in the sky, until they are nothing but ash. The four of us fell from the sky, below us was a massive pile of ash in which we safely landed in. Ngyuyang was getting back up he wouldn’t stay down. Just as we thought it was round two with wyvern tamer, the grey clouds darkened more and more, when a human-like figure fell from the sky and impalied ngyuyang, with... a staff? Ngyuyang’s physical form was no more, his soul was absorbed into the staff. This was no ordinary sorcerer... this was... Albotross the Enchanter.

    To be continued...
     
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  2. PapaaaaaaTia

    PapaaaaaaTia Member Builder

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    jesus I think I nearly died from reading all this. but dragons is the best suggestion (my opinion) x
     
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  3. xReveal

    xReveal Faithful Poster Member

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    #BringShazBack
    The crowd wants me back :c
     
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  4. Diyon335

    Diyon335 Ancient Poster Member

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    Eyy I'm still alive
     
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  5. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    HOW DARE YOU KILL MY BOI ngyuyang
     
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  6. ngyuyang

    ngyuyang Nimble Knuckle Member

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    Rep me
    I shouldn't have made that post....

    Jiu jiu wo = save me
    Nan hai = boy
     
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  7. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    If you think your death now is tragic, you should’ve seen your past life. Your lore is one of the saddest I could come up with. When you were just born, your parents have died due to a disease that I previously mentioned in the other comics. Soon you were found by hunters, but instead of taking you in, those disgusting beings threw you in a river and left you to drown. You were floating along the river, until you reached the Gaia’s lake. The gaia’s lake was normally where non-flame wyverns went to quench their thirst. The wyverns could’ve eaten you but unlike the hunters, they took care of you. And now you do the same for them.
     
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  8. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    R.I.P ngyuyang
     
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  9. Verang

    Verang stop messing with my perms plz Member

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    Wow the heck this is dark :O
     
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  10. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Most of the people in this story has dark lore. Such as Shazil who was once a guardian angel who tasked to guard the heavens, then soon fell pray to an infection that Corrupted Vurow, Albotross The Enchanter And many others..
     
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  11. RenanBr1214

    RenanBr1214 Quick Digit Member

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    R.I.P Renan Reading text
     
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