Right back from where we left off. After the hand of judgement was slain after mentioning the Corrupted One. PyroKnight, Luisa and Kocoski advance forth into a deeper part of the cave, what lies there? Let’s find out. The cold lifeless body laid there by the stone where his face was impaled, whispers were heard. All of a sudden a spirit rose from the body, a shining white, the shiny glow shone through out the cave, giving light to the dark and empty cave. The spirit flew into the heavens. Vurow may have died, but his spirit was free. ???: You’ve arrived late. Vurow was greeted by a tall woman, about three inches taller than him. He looked up to her and said… Vurow: Shazil? What a surprise? He freed you as well? Shazil: He is our last hope to defeat the corrupted one. He has a long way to go. Vurow: The Corrupted One is not my biggest concern… what about Dark Thought? Shazil turned to face the fallen warrior, she tried to comfort him. Shazil: Dark Thought is ridden; he is no longer a threat. Vurow turned back to look at the guardian of the heavens. In a cold tone he spoke… Vurow: We’ll see. Vurow walked away in silence. Shazil continued to watch all from the heavens. Meanwhile in the caves, Kocoski, Luisa and I are still hiding from NightTroy and his army. Kocoski was ignoring me after my ‘selfish’ behaviour. Luisa was asking Kocoski what happened. Kocoski: I don’t want to talk about it. Luisa: Please… you can tell me anything. I’m your best friend. Kocoski: I still don’t want to talk about it. After walking for what feels like an eternity, we hear a loud ‘THUD’ coming from a large tunnel. At first we thought it was nothing, then it started to make a loud ‘ROAR’ noise. That moment, we defiantly knew it was not nothing. Kocoski and Luisa wanted to go the other way, but I couldn’t ignore it. I went through long hollow dark tunnel. I heard roaring for a while, then I started to hear a ‘licking’ sound. At the end of the tunnel, I found a big empty room, the floor was covered in small puddles of blood, the walls were covered in scratch marks, spelling out ‘Charlotte, forgive me’. PyroKnight: Charlotte… who’s… Before I can finish my sentence I hear a loud ‘THUD’ once more. The thud was getting louder and louder. The pools of blood on the floor was shaking, the ground was vibrating, the walls were crumbling. Out from the darkest corner of the cave, was a massive creature that looked like a bear, a very ugly bear. The bear had a long neck, it’s organs was hanging out of its stomach, half its face was ripped off, it had a large bony tail almost as long as his neck and had arms and legs coming out its back. The bear turned to its side and drank some of the blood on the floor, when the puddle dried up, red stains were still on the floor. PyroKnight: Foul beast... The massive half-skeleton bear gazed at me in anger, getting into a crouching position ready to strike. The beast was fierce, his flesh was falling off it, his brain was sticking out of his left eye. What became a low growl was now angry snarls and snaps. His daggered teeth were dripping blood. I had enough of this beast’s nonsense. Beast: Charlotte… The words that lingered out of the beast’s mouth was intimidating, could the beast be Charlotte, could the beast have something to do with Charlotte, who is Charlotte? In a blink of an eye, he pounced, leaping into the air, with his organs hanging off him, swinging his head around, attacking with his mighty paws. The beast was aggressive and would not let up. I would not take it no longer, I stabbed the beast in its throat pouring out blood. In the background was Kocoski and Luisa watching me fight a wretched beast. Kocoski: You know what? Screw this. Luisa: Kocoski? Where are you going? Kocoski got up and ran towards the big bear. Kocoski was going all out at its ankle, causing the angry beast to collapse. In rage I threw the heavy monster at the roof of the cave, causing rocks to crumble and fall on top of it. Through the hole, the moonlight was revealed, shining its way into the dark cave. When all was silent, the moonlight revealed a large sword glowing a blueish-white. The beast turned on its side to gaze at the shiny blade. Beast: You… You were at my side... all this time? Kocoski: What? The beast rose up from its lying position and picked up the sword with one of its arms growing out of its back. The beast’s neck grew longer and longer until it looked more like a giraffe. Out of the sides of its neck, grew two large arms the size of logs. One of the beast’s new arms grabbed the sword of its back and stared into its shiny glow. Beast: I missed you… Charlotte. Luisa: That can’t be… can it? Turns out the towering beast was Sir John. One of the knights hired by the King of Duality. It seems John was cursed by a witch, but the witch could not complete her spell, so John became the monstrosity I saw before my eyes. John was famous for wielding a glass sword that never broke. John: I’ll never let go of you… ever again. John turned back at us, what went from a happy mood, turned into pure rage. While our backs were turned he struck me, pinning me to the ground. He was more aggressive than he was before. He was devastating, he was ruthless, he has humanity back. But is consumed in anger, trying to defend his dead wife. John: CHARLOTTE!! GODDESS OF MOONLIGHT, WHO’S SHINE DEVOURS NIGHT! FORGIVE MY SINS! John was waving his sword around, each hit more aggressive than the last. He stabs the inside of his mouth, vomiting blood across the cave. He was more and more angry by the second and he’d do anything to kill us. I managed to jump onto its head and stab him through the skull. He was waving his head around back and forth back and forth. Until I reached into his skull and rib his brain out. One last devastating cry, he screamed… John: CHARLOTTE…. I’m… sorry… To be contuined…
https://www.guildcraft.org/threads/pink-moon-chapter-1-the-start-page1-mollie.52574/ The greatest story this forums has ever written. I remember my friends and I at the time had a lot of fun reading this. ~ xeph xo
Woah, this actually existed? It's actually not bad, a story made with GuildCraft players... Interesting, very interesting indeed. Glad you like Pink Moon, though it is still going, what you read is a probably before I could write without grammar mistakes. Right now it's at... 30th or so chapters? Maybe more, and with a deeper lore and more plot fixes. Anyhow, well done.
