»Comic Twelve

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  1. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Welcome people of the internet, old and new. Today I have another comic, I was going to release this one, three days ago however I was a bit unsatisfied with the ending result. So I changed a couple of parts of the story and I turned autocorrect off, and I made the story make a bit more sense. If you are new to this comic series, I suggest you go read my first comic, so the story can make sense to you, anyways let’s get back right where we left off.

    ‘Pain’ a feeling we feel when physically harmed, some people such as myself live in pain, mental pain, but in this fight between me, Kocoski against ThunderKnight and TerraKnight, I feel both kinds of pain. The two brothers were driven mad, no matter the cost, no matter how many people are slain, no matter what comes after them next, as long as they kill me... their pain will end.

    ThunderKnight: Ignorant one... aren’t you? Protecting some child, for what cause?
    PyroKnight: The Boy is not your concern!

    As ThunderKnight drops his guard I slid under his static slim legs and knocked him over like a jenga tower. Unfortunately I let my guard down as well, allowing TerraKnight grab me by the neck and hammering me into the wall giving ThunderKnight time to get up, when he gets up he joins TerraKnight to beat me into the wall of rocks and stone. The brothers made a grand mistake, both their guards were down and Kocoski snuck up behind them allowing him to cover TerraKnight’s eyes, allowing him to blind TerraKnight smashing ThunderKnight straight in the face.

    ThunderKnight: ARGH!!

    That was an unpleasant idea, he could’ve woken the giant from its grand slumber. As TerraKnight and ThunderKnight were cornering Kocoski and I, we heard a footstep... a big one... to loud and deep to be TerraKnight’, but... too quiet and light to be a giant’s. Kocoski assured me of what a giant walking sounds like. Whatever the creature was... it was drawing closer and closer, making loud grunting sounds, and made a loud noise, a yawn like sound, maybe we did wake it up.

    ???: Subintroierunt.
    Kocoski: What is that?
    Italo: Uhh...

    After Luisa bumped into a odd shaped rock, she noticed a symbols on it and found the picture of soul eaters, fighting an army, and the Giant of Time appears to save the army, however it also shows that one soul eater survived. It was the queen of the soul eaters... Shazil.

    Luisa: Guys... Run.
    Italo: Why?

    Stomping out of the caverns with a large swords stabbed into it’s back, with long narrow arms and is about eighteen feet tall, with ten horns sticking out of it’s head and a faceless head, with a heart in the center, it was Shazil, Queen of the Soul Eaters. No one has lived to see the queen up close, the only problem is that I am a soul! She spoke in a deep loud voice, that echoed throughout the cave.

    Shazil: Mortalium dampnas! Et tu morieris.
    Kocoski: Does anyone else understand what she’s saying?
    PyroKnight: I am unsure boy. Just stay calm.
    Italo: HOW DO WE STAY CALM?! THERE’S AN ENORMOUS SOUL EATER THAT’S GOING TO KILL US!!
    Shazil: Silentio magno unus. Tu et amici tui Reliqua perbit!

    With one large stomp, the ground quaked beneath our feet. ThunderKnight and TerraKnight were about to make their chance to flee. I charge myself towards them, stopping them in their tracks before they can get away successfully.

    PyroKnight: You two! You two are the cause of this situation, you shall fix this, have you learnt nothing from the king?
    ThunderKnight: We don’t listen to suck ups.

    As he finished his gut-wrenching sentence, I was holding him tighter, so tight he could barely move.

    PyroKnight: THERE ARE INNOCENT CHILDREN WHO ARE RISKING THEIR LIVES FOR YOUR MISTAKE!!
    ThunderKnight: Well that’s their fault!

    If bickering with ThunderKnight wasn’t bad enough, Shazil reaches out her large thin hands. With the very palm of said hands opened a large bright orange eyeball.

    Shazil: Tu effugere non potes me.

    Before Shazil could react, I summon Excalibur and stab her right in the eye. Shazil roared in anger.

    Shazil: Et parum rusticus! Pugna pueri mei!
    PyroKnight: ThunderKnight and TerraKnight... fix this... the both of you.
    Shazil: Spero te gustare nice quod.

    With a deep breath, Shazil was attempting to absorb every living soul around her. I then remembered something. Her heart was where her mouth was, I need to find some way to get close to it. While my back was turned, I was jumped by the babbling brothers, trying to get me eaten. I struggle my way out of it and launch TerraKnight into Shazil’s mouth. TerraKnight was screaming in pain, he knew this was how he would end. ThunderKnight was shocked to witness the tragic death of his wise brother.

    ThunderKnight: You... you... killed my brother... You Killed My BROTHER!

    ThunderKnight blinded by rage, ignored me and charged straight towards Kocoski.

    ThunderKnight: Take someone close to me?! Now it’s your turn!
    PyroKnight: BOY!

    I turn to face Shazil and turn back to face ThunderKnight, I knew how to kill Shazil and ThunderKnight at the same time, the simple ‘Kill two birds with one stone’.

    PyroKnight: Boy, I have a plan! Stay there!
    Kocoski: But ThunderKnight will kill me!
    PyroKnight: I doubt it.

    I draw Shazil’s attention to me, I grab the chains I had for when I broke out of the guild city, I wrapped the chains around ThunderKnight’s hand and pull Kocoski free, I then boost Kocoski up on top of Shzail.

    Shazil: OFF UT A ME SUBDITUS!
    Kocoski: Now What?
    PyroKnight: Focus Shazil towards ThunderKnight! I’ll hold ThunderKnight in place.
    Kocoski: What?! Are you insane?! You could die!
    PyroKnight: I do not care!

    As quick as I could I held ThunderKnight back so he couldn’t move, he was struggling with all his might, Kocoski was guiding Shazil to focus her aim on ThunderKnight!

    PyroKnight: Boy! On my mark...

    Kocoski was waiting impatiently, worried my plan might not work. He keeps Shazil’s eyes covered for as long as he can. Worried she could be draining his soul too.

    PyroKnight: ... NOW!!

    As fast as the speed of sound, Kocoski reveals to Shazil her next supper, I quickly jump out of the way before I was devoured by the titanic beast.

    ThunderKnight: YOU WILL NEVER HIDE THAT BOY FROM HIS TRUE NATURE! NEVER!!!

    As his last words were spoken he was absorbed, but the electricity was too much for Shazil to handle, her heart was pumping too fast, she was about to explode.

    PyroKnight: Boy! Jump!

    Kocoski leaps down to the ground, I catch him so he doesn’t bleed. As we look up we hear a loud ‘BANG’, followed by a rain of blood and rocks scattered across the floor. Italo and Luisa saw the entire thing, they were having mixed emotions, either they feel proud of Kocoski for killing a soul eater, or scared because Kocoski was working with me.

    To be continued...
     
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  2. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    PyroKnight comes a long way in these comics. First it’s bashing Xeph in the face with a tree now it’s exploding Shazil’s heart
     
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  3. xReveal

    xReveal Faithful Poster Member

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    Since when im a girl? xd
     
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  4. TigerStrike

    TigerStrike Ancient Poster Member

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    uhm shaz is a boy
     
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  5. Chrono

    Chrono Member Member

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    HAHAHAHAHA
     
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