»~Pink Moon~ ==Chapter 1: The start--Page1: Mollie==

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    ~~~~ Pink moon ~~~~
    ===CHAPTER 1: The start===
    ===Page1: Mollie ===
    In tokyo japan, 2016 the summer holidays were just over and a new year was about to begin.
    Jessica : I cant believe the holidays are already over, I'm ready for everything but another year of studies....

    It was the first day of school, the bell rang for the first time, you could notice from the looks on people's faces that they weren't ready for another semester and are still hung up from the hang overs.
    The science teacher was first to enter the class but he was a new teacher for the majority of students.

    Science teacher : Welcome everyone,
    I'm very exited for this new year, I believe we are going to have a great year together without having any problems.... RIGHT?
    Class responded in a scared way : YES we're sure we will....

    Science teacher : Good now before introducing others I want to introduce myself
    My name is : Mr. Kai you can call me Mr. K.
    Class : Nice to meet u Mr. K!

    Mr. K : Nice to meet you too, alright now before we make any progress I would like to introduce to you a new student joining us for the start of the journey.
    Everyone please welcome : Mollie
    A girl with a pink hair and green eyes approached the class and introduced herself to the class in a very polite and kind way.

    Mollie : hey there,
    My name is Mollie I think as you already noticed my favorite color is pink, am 17 years old and I come from the Sakura highschool, I was born in Kyoto.
    Jessica whisspered to her friends : She is 17!! She is younger than us with two years also students from the Sakura highschool are really smart!
    I'm not really liking this girl....
    And of caurse I hope we all have a great year full of great memories... and bad marks haha
    Class : ........
    Alright thank you Mr.K
    No problem Mollie that was a great introduction, you may take the first empty seat over there.

    Mr. K: Alright now class who can remind me what's a ...
    Mollie interupts and replies really fast
    Mollie : A cell? It's the smallest part in the human body and every part of living creatures includes of a huge amount of cells that forms it, also there is two types of cells a somatic cell and a sexual cell also..
    Mr. K: Nice Mollie I'm liking your hype for the new year, and your detailing for every information, but you can't just interupt my questions like this young lady, watch out next time!
    Mollie : But I heard you finished your whole qusetion sir.
    Mr. K: No I didnt but even if you interupted me in a very rude way, your answear was more than enough and so I shall add you an extra point in the next science exam.
    Jessica : WHAT ? are you serious sir, with all my respect she just interupted you in a very rude way and even if we ignored that we didn't even have a chance to answer you!
    Mr. K: Firstly what is your name Miss?
    Jessica replied very frustrated: It's jessica
    Mr. K: Okay, nice to meet you Jessica, now I know you are frustrated from this for some reason but maybe she hit luck, also her answer was perfect and i dont think you would've been able to over come that answer AM i right ?
    Jessica : I guess we will never know ....
    Mr. K: Sorry for that Mollie ok let's continue our lesson for today...
    Jessica whisspered to her friends : I will not allow this girl to get the spotlights over us!

    *bell rings*
    Mr. K: Alright Class this is it today for science I hope you undrestood our lesson and make sure to solve the activities I gave you see you tomorrow.
    Jessica : Check this

    Jessica was aproaching mollie to taunt her.
    Mollie : Hello jess!
    Jessica : Only my friends call me Jess so don't you dare do that again!
    Mollie : Oo...k hello Jessica how are you doing!
    Jessica: Not the best i could have been much better...

    Mollie undrestood what jessica was refering to but prefaired to not make troubles in her first day
    Mollie : Well we all get our good and bad days eh?
    Jessica : Maybe, but I know that I was doing soo much better before a outcast came along and started bragging with her Science knowledge.
    Mollie: .... I don't know what are you trying to refer to, but I'll just ignore it...
    Now if you excuse me I need to get my books from my closet.

    *bell rings* for the two last hours of the day Mollie was taking her books out of the closet and heading towards the class, but jessica and her friends were coming the the other way, as they blocked her way on purpose she kindly asked them
    Mollie : Can I head to the class please ?
    Jessica : Let me think.... No you can take the other way this is the popular students way you take the longer one.

    *Mollie started thinking that she is going to have a bad year but she can't let them get the best of hers so she slowly changed her way to the class*
    Jessica was really mad : WHY !! is she not affected with confrontations ? she is so disturbing !! agh !
    After a long day Mollie was so tired from school and the troubles it brough with it she was thinking in every step how to overcome these problems and why did she hear the teacher finish his questions while he actually did'nt, many questions were roaming around her head but only time shall answear them when the right time comes
    ~~~~PAGE 1 : END~~~~
     
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    what do you by um this is a story that i created i even posted a post that am going to release this but u replied with something that i still dont undrestand please if u have an idea / theory / opinion you want to share please do but if u want to make me and the story look really stupid then please refer from that
     
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    10/10 title
     
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    I like it, yeah
     
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    -_- really come on you stoopid noob give a real opinion or i'll cry
     
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    may i ask why the cringe ? if you dont like it dont read it period but i guess you cant keep it to yourself you have o ruin it on other people ? i bet u didnt even read it !
     
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    It's good in my opinion. Even though I am no an anime fan ,-,
     
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    nc ;3
     
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    THANK you finally a good reply now am really happy even if only two ppl liked it am really happy :)
    dw the story is just starting it's getting SOOOO exiting :D
     
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    thank youuuu :D
    expect allot in the future as it'll get surprising !!! ;) <3
     
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  14. Super_PvPer

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    Too long to read, nice job tho, it's a new thing in GC xD
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    Nice story I want more. :D
     
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    Mr.Ench: @2920131 fix your mistakes!.
     
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    Tbh I liked it

    But the dialogue, Omg that sexy grammar


    Decent first chapter 7/10
     
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    I love it, I am an Anime Fan <3
     
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