Ok the intro is realy good and all but its a little to long try to stich around 10 seaconds. Try just putting the name and some flashy colors and moves and thats enough. For the " please like" etc. you can make a separate video...outro if you have ever heard of it^^ Here is a good exsample:
This gave me visual and hearing herpes. The combination with royalty free music and a block intro with cringey text doesn't work as a good intro + it's 35 seconds long...
