»Comic Sixteen

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Who’s a better antagonist (Main villain)

  1. Dark Thought

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  2. aXed

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  1. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    Congratulations, readers of guildcraft. We have reached number sixteen. Before we begin, I have an announcement. Most you are probably getting confused with the lore, and whom the main villain is. Well I can tell you the lore now and the comic will explain a bit more about the villain. Around a thousand years ago, a massive disease broke out causing the land to burst into pure chaos. The king of Duality believed that a witch caused it, so the king sent John. John was cursed by the witch however and realised the witch was not the cause of the infection. Shazil and Vurow tried to cure the infection along with others, but sadly fell prey to the disease and became corrupted. Hopefully that sets things straight but now the villain... let’s begin.

    Xephanez: ARGH! Are you sure this is the correct place?
    Viqious: Indeed. This should be the one. If anyone can revive father... it’s him.

    The two sisters, Xephanez and Viqious are climbing a volcano to find someone who can revive their fallen father Diyon. After a short while they manage to find an entrance. It lead into the heart of the volcano.
    With her head shaking, she turns her head to her younger sister and asks...

    Xephanez: What are we going to tell him?
    Viqious: ... let’s just tell him, that his loving granddaughters need his help.
    Xephanez: I’m not sure we really count...
    Viqious: Just shut up!

    Xephanez and Viqious enter the large hallway leading to the core of the fiery mountain. By their side, crumbled rocks fell to their feet, sizzling when in contact. With her dead father on her shoulders, Xephanez struggles to move a bit. Eventually, they stumbled to hear deep hissing and snarling, they found him...

    Viqious: Here he is...
    Xephanez: Well go on...
    Viqious: What?
    Xephanez: You were the one who came up with the idea.
    Viqious: You’re holding the REASON we crawled here. Suck it up princess and go ask him!
    Xephanez: You first.
    ???: Darlings... relax.

    Behind the curtains of lava, was a big black and purple snake, with a large brain on it’s back, along with six large arms attached to the walls, motionless. The snake-like creature was trapped within the volcano, it’s snarls and hisses grew louder and louder, as it struggles to break free from it’s personal hell.

    Xephanez: Dark Thought...
    Viqious: Hello...
    Dark Thought: You two are as cowardly as your father tells me.
    Xephanez: Speaking of Father...
    Dark Thought: Give him to me.
    Xephanez: What?
    Dark Thought: I shall not repeat... give... your father... to me.
    Xephanez: How...
    Dark Thought: I can read your thoughts... your mind is not safe from me... no one is. Now... your father.

    Xephanez hands her dead dad to the creature of hatred. It’s “brain” grew a large dark orange eyeball, and another and another and another. When you thought it was over, Dark Thought’s brain eye opened up, like a large mouth, revealing a tongue. A long slithering tongue, lifted Diyon from the ground.

    Dark Thought: My creation... I may be... imprisoned. But that... will not forbid me... from giving you eternal life... let the flow of hatred... and anger, coarse through your veins. You are my blood... and mine alone.

    Finishing his sentence, Dark Thought devoured Diyon. Crunching and snapping bones echoed throughout the volcano. After a brief silence, out of one of his “brain eyes” came Diyon, like a phoenix... he was reborn.
    A coughing Phoenix that wouldn’t shut his mouth. When he finally stopped his coughing and groaning he finally got up and looked at his imprisoned creator.

    Diyon: Dark... Dark Thought.
    Dark Thought: Now leave... none of you have purpose for me... however... there is one thing you can do for me...
    Diyon: What?
    Viqious: For reviving our father, what are your demands?
    Dark Thought: Find... PyroKnight.

    To be continued...
     
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  2. Angry945

    Angry945 Nimble Knuckle Member

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    How has nobody made a meme of this yet?
     
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  3. Xeph

    Xeph Big Mood Member

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    Funny to see my sister is included in this, normally in scenarios where we're partnered up and doing activities together we're trying to kill each as we both annoy each other.


    Thanks for including us!

    ~ xeph xo

    edit:
    I told my sister what her thoughts were about being added within a comic and she said this;

    "AHHH MAN well like it's a bit weird init but at the same time its pretty sick because mans never got mentioned in anything before so im raa gassed init. who would make a comic about us though, especially you ya sausage (directed to me) naaah man that's proper sick tell the guy i said thanks yeah init yeah"
     
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  4. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    So, the comic version is slightly more friendly than you in real life?
     
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  5. ngyuyang

    ngyuyang Nimble Knuckle Member

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    I haven't written any descriptions in a while so here's my take on describing your personal lovecraftian horror.

    A fiery curtain of lava reveals a large snake as black as the night with purple streaks flowing like rivers on the scaly body of this beast. A pink and fleshy brain the size of a boulder is held to the back of this monster's head. The hisses and screeches of the snake echo about in the volcano for which traps the monster in it's personal hell.
    .......
    It's brain spurts forth an eye, releasing slime and blood in the process and out comes another and another each of them are the size of a football and emanate a dark orange glow. One of these eyes burst open to expose a meter long tongue and teeth with the length and sharpness of swords. The tongue wraps Diyon up in a sticky mess. ......
     
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  6. Pyro Knight

    Pyro Knight Enthusiast Member

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    While this is indeed an excellent description, I did state that the brain was black and purple.
     
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