»~Pink Moon~ ==Page 13== :Sun... The princess of time

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  1. 2920131

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    ~~~~Pink Moon~~~~
    ===Page 13: Sun.. The Princess of time===
    Alexandra: Imagination ?
    Mollie replied really confident: Yep, Imagination! All I try to do is imaginating my power or the object itself doing a specefic act such as in this case i imaginated the apple floating ... Seems weird i kno...
    Alexandra very excited said: No, It's perfect! You managed to find a way to get used to your powers in the first step of your training!
    It took me so long to find a way!This means....

    Mollie started thinking to herself: It's not like i figured it out myself ... should i tell her about the voices i keep hearing ?
    Alexandra : Sweet, Guess we are going to the next step !
    Mollie : Already ???
    Alexandra: Yep, but this time it won't be simple. Actually since you already found a way to get used to your powers i'm going to skip few steps.
    Follow me We got some walking to do

    Mollie very tired replied: Aw not again!
    1 Day later...
    Mollie: We better be there !
    Alexandra: Yep we're here.
    Mollie sarcasticly replied: Another place with trees all over the place ? really ?
    Alexandra: Yes indeed come here...

    Alexandra led Mollie to a circle of trees which really seemed weird as the trees formed a perfect circle shape .
    In the middle of the trees there was a star marking encraved on the ground.

    Alexandra: Stand in the middle of the star over there.
    Mollie slowly approached the middle of the star.

    As she reached it Alexandra said a weird spell.
    In Order to achieve a pure and a peacefull goal I Alexandra the controller of Advanced mind powers Summon Sun the princess of time !
    As soon as Alexandra finished the magical spell a beam rose from the middle of the star and reached the sky.
    Mollie was really confused and didn't know what was happening .

    Suddenly a girl with Yellow hair and blue eyes appeared infront of Mollie.
    ???: Hi!
    Mollie was super confused and didn't know how to reply so she took the situation simply: H... hey! Who are you?
    Sun: I'm Sun the princess of time line.
    Wait if you don't know who i'am then who summoned me?

    Alexandra replied: I did.
    Sun replied really shocked and happy at the same time: Alex! It's been long I missed you! ... I guess you no longer need me around?
    Alexandra: No, No no no, it's not like that i just been really busy and i didn't had the chance to call you or even contact you i'm so sorry
    Sun replied with a really peacefull smile: Don't apologize, i undrestand. In the end we all have problems in our lifes that we need to solve, you're still like i remember you. you sure earth people age ?
    Alexandra: O you stop it, i look older than my grandmother.
    You're the one that haven't aged not me. how old are you now in Your dimention's age ofcaurse.

    Sun: 15. People in my dimention especially my bloodline age super slow, but you are still pretty.
    Alexandra: Well thank you... Even tho it's not true...
    So i'm sure you're wondering why i summoned you here.
    So i would like you to start Mollie's next training step

    Sun: I see... i remember you took very long to master your powers.. how is she doing?
    Alexandra: She found a way to controll her powers, not fully but still all was done in the first step and in a very short time..
    Sun being shocked replied: Wait... It took you ages to figure that out .. Wait!! 1st step ? are you skipping her the other steps ?
    You know that could be very dangereous also consider that if she isn't strong physically and mentally she could possible not make it trought this step.

    Alexandra replied worried : I know... That's why i called you.
    I want you to watch over her while she goes trought this.

    Sun: I don't know Alex ... this could be very risky you were really strong when you were young .. and i mean REALLY strong...
    Alexandra: Trust me Sun she is really capable...
    Sun: *sigh* Fine.. But she better be a serious learner and not a sarcastic person ..
    Alexandra: She is more serious than i ever was.
    Ok You can start the task
    Thank you Sun...

    Mollie: So .. What are we doing exactly ?
    Sun rushed to Mollie: Let's go Mollie...
    Mollie : Wait. How do you know my naa....
    Sun held Mollie's hand right after so the beam rose again and Mollie and Sun had disapeared.
    Alexandra: I trust both of you please make it trought ...

    To Be Continued ...
    ==Page 13: END==
    ===========Chapter 1: END===============
    Annnd that's chapter 1 done guys :) was a really amazing month+ at making this and i had a BLAST ! like seriously i didn't expect such a support but you guys just blew me off ! :D thanks you so much and don't worry chapter 2 will be coming ''hopefully'' very soon :D
    Thanks again <3

    Edit: i have to give a shoutout for @camEEla_cabeYo and her roleplays

    yes as much as those roleplays make me tomato red
    and prolly make the story seem less serious work was done on those story so i gotta give a shoutout to those and ofc they deserve some respect :)
     
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  2. TheMinecraftProLord

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    LOL NICE <o/ cant wait to meet moon (HE better be there -.-)
     
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  3. camEEla_cabeYo

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    THE FONT HURTS MY EYES WHAT HAPPENED TO THE OLD STRUCTURE MAAAAAANNNNN
     
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    we'll see we'll see :)
    I'm TRYING TO EVOLVE MY STORY BARE WITH ;-; ;-; ;-;
    tho you like it ? :D
     
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    nc nc :D
     
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  6. Jeremiah_NubRico

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    i smell some weebs making this into anime hentai shit.....
     
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    ain't no one touching this story with their hentai shit -_-
    hope you liked it <<3
    thanks kuby kuba <3
     
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  8. ScarYHD

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    Why do i feel like Sun's twin will be Moon and she will be the mysterious person in mollies mind that talks, she will also be evil as fuk and she was the teacher of the evil girl that attacked mollie in the hospital
    THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME

    :)
     
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    maybe :3 who knows
    ALSO STOP ALL TALKING ABOUT MOON we'll get moon in time !
    i'm so glad you love it first person to react with a theory <3

    respect
     
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  10. McSkillet

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    who gives a shit about this...
    jk
    nidceda
     
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  11. 2920131

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    ._. you didn't even read it did you ?
     
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  12. McSkillet

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    doesn't worth it !!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's piece of crap no offense.
    jk
    No time i got customers ;3
     
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    ._. fine whatever then ;-;
    no long for pink moon
     
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  14. TheMinecraftProLord

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    I'm gonna be that weeb, brb
     
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    2920131 Forum Master Member

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    YOU AINT GONNA TOUCH THE STORY WITH YOUR DIRTY MINDS !
     
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  16. Sherif

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    Ow, Nice Chapter :)
    Really Cant wait For Next Chapter :D
     
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    thanks <3 glad you like it ^-^
    --- Double Post Merged, May 21, 2017, Original Post Date: May 21, 2017 ---
    *facepalm* i just relised i could have came up with a better title
    gimme a sec <3
     
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    ...

    Yes... I really HAVE to adapt to COLORFUL script text... and that's even worse than script text...
     
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  19. 2920131

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    ._. is that all you could say ?
     
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  20. FrostLancer

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    Yes. Yes that is all I could say that borderlines "Neutral". The rest ranges from "Stern Critic-level" to "Gordon-Ramsay-Savage-level Critic"
    --- Double Post Merged, May 22, 2017, Original Post Date: May 22, 2017 ---
    Well... It was fking raw... They probably deserved it. :/
     
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